Pizzaroma's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Toucan - Dialogue]

Nice job. It has a nice flow, and is simple yet interesting. Very indicative of Koji Kondo (in a very good way too). Overall a good listen.

SilentTakedown responds:

Thanks! Yeah, Koji Kondo.

[Fox Dog Hymn]

Hmm

Church Singing + Fox Dog = Good Music, but.. disturbing? Nice Job regardless.

Bezo responds:

What is disturbing about it?

[Through Space]

Nice, but...

I like it, but there's a few things that I think you should work on.

The song is just the same basic thing repeating over and over again... it just goes part A (0:00-0:15), and part B (0:15-0:27). I'd say you should make the notes move up or down a bit, and make it a bit longer. Variety is the key to making something enjoyable (But not too much). Also, the second part at some steps sounds a bit not flowing.

Overall, good, but need works.

Spartacus90 responds:

I like your ideas man. thanks.
You should listen to my other song and write a review. It's called "Two-Dimensional World." It's still pretty repetitive, and every time I listen to it I find something else wrong with it or another way to improve it. But it's still a good song.

[=The Day Has Come=]

Good, and...

I like the song, it reminds me of well... Command and Conquer, but I'd have to agree with Cyprus X, although the song is still good...

I think there could be a larger emphasis on the bass rather than the that wave/pad. Either way, it could be a tad quieter, and It'd play better as something more ambient.

Hades responds:

Hm, I wasn't even aware of the bass being overpowered by the pad. I guess it could be a bit more ambiental if I made some minor tweaks to it. Thanks for pointing that out, and thanks for the review!

[Relentless Resolve]

Good Song

It's a good song... there's just two main things I would fix.

The first, is the first synth chord before the piano starts playing seems really out of place.

The second, is I would heavily reccomend adding in some light cymbal for the drums.

Other than that, it's all good in my opinion.

Satoris responds:

Thank you, I was debating with myself for a while whether or not to leave the chord in. I think I finally decided to keep it because I wanted the listener to feel the relaxing calm of success after overcoming difficult and sometimes annoying challenges.

[Farmer Joes Cookies]

Nice Job

Very good, I like it... and it's interesting on how evilrocker rated it a 10 though although he said that...

windpillow responds:

lol, you get people like that, he did what was best anyway :P

[Clean You Like A Bidet]

My ears are bleeding

They honestly are, this has no musical value, and makes me want to through up. This is also in NO WAY classical.

I would prefer if it had some real instruments and if the sounds didn't kill your ears.

You can't say a song is good based on what it's supposed to be about.

FuckDemon responds:

You just don't see the MEANING behind the song. IT's a beautiful catalouge of the plight mankind has and is experiencing. If you can't see that, then you're as blind as and old woman with cataracts.

I am a genius, and only the blind can not see that.