Pizzaroma's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Toucan - Dialogue]

Nice job. It has a nice flow, and is simple yet interesting. Very indicative of Koji Kondo (in a very good way too). Overall a good listen.

SilentTakedown responds:

Thanks! Yeah, Koji Kondo.

[Princess Marion]

Nice

I like it. Feels / sounds like Thomas Newman meets Howard Shore. The texture and color is flavorful. Keep it up.

[Fox Dog Hymn]

Hmm

Church Singing + Fox Dog = Good Music, but.. disturbing? Nice Job regardless.

Bezo responds:

What is disturbing about it?

[Roman war]

Eh..

It's okay. The high point is the rhythym. There are quite a bit of things you can work on however...

Firstly, it's a bit repetitive. There is no building.
Secondly, this song is NOT classical. Using instruments you find in an orchestra in no way makes it "classical" or "art music". Half the stuff added to this genre on newgrounds isn't even classical.

When comparing it to similiar music of it's style, it felt as though there wasn't enough of a sort of "build", but rather stayed a bit level, once again kind of the same stuff over and over again for 3 minutes.

For a Psuedo Genre song like this, I would rate it a 6/10 still.. so I'll still give you that. If I was rating it as a "classical" work, it'd be lower.

[I Feel Like Dancing!]

Hmm..

The song, ignoring the lyrics is pretty great. The lyrics are funny. The only reason I didn't give it a 9, is that the voice could be a little louder, and it is.. creepy still. :D Still love it though.

[Through Space]

Nice, but...

I like it, but there's a few things that I think you should work on.

The song is just the same basic thing repeating over and over again... it just goes part A (0:00-0:15), and part B (0:15-0:27). I'd say you should make the notes move up or down a bit, and make it a bit longer. Variety is the key to making something enjoyable (But not too much). Also, the second part at some steps sounds a bit not flowing.

Overall, good, but need works.

Spartacus90 responds:

I like your ideas man. thanks.
You should listen to my other song and write a review. It's called "Two-Dimensional World." It's still pretty repetitive, and every time I listen to it I find something else wrong with it or another way to improve it. But it's still a good song.

[=The Day Has Come=]

Good, and...

I like the song, it reminds me of well... Command and Conquer, but I'd have to agree with Cyprus X, although the song is still good...

I think there could be a larger emphasis on the bass rather than the that wave/pad. Either way, it could be a tad quieter, and It'd play better as something more ambient.

Hades responds:

Hm, I wasn't even aware of the bass being overpowered by the pad. I guess it could be a bit more ambiental if I made some minor tweaks to it. Thanks for pointing that out, and thanks for the review!